MIT
The following is an exact transcription of
a letter John Mongan received from MIT, and the reply that he sent them. Unfortunately,
they chose to discontinue their correspondence at that point. I have heard, however, that
their recruitment letter has been revised and is far less snotty than it once was.
April 18, 1994
Mr. John T. Mongan
123 Main Street
Smalltown, California 94123-4567
Dear John:
You've got the grades. You've certainly got
the PSAT scores. And now you've got a letter from MIT. Maybe you're surprised. Most
students would be. But you're not most students. And that's exactly why I urge you to
consider carefully one of the most selective universities in America.
The level of potential reflected in your
performance is a powerful indicator that you might well be an excellent candidate for MIT.
It certainly got my attention!
Engineering's not for you? No problem. It
may surprise you to learn we offer more than 40 major fields of study, from architecture
to brain and cognitive sciences, from economics (perhaps the best program in the country)
to writing.
What? Of course, you don't want to be
bored. Who does? Life here is tough and demanding, but it's also fun. MIT students are
imaginative and creative - inside and outside the classroom.
You're interested in athletics? Great! MIT
has more varsity teams - 39 - than almost any other university, and a tremendous
intramural program so everybody can participate.
You think we're too expensive? Don't be too
sure. We've got surprises for you there, too.
Why not send the enclosed Information
Request to find out more about this unique institution? Why not do it right now?
Sincerely,
Michael C. Benhke
Director of Admissions
P.S. If you'd like a copy of a fun-filled,
fact-filled brochure, "Insight," just check the appropriate box on the form.
May 5, 1994
Michael C. Behnke
MIT Director of Admissions
Office of Admissions, Room 3-108
Cambridge MA 02139-4307
Dear Michael:
You've got the reputation. You've certainly
got the pomposity. And now you've got a letter from John Mongan. Maybe you're surprised.
Most universities would be. But you're not most universities. And that's exactly why I
urge you to carefully consider one of the most selective students in America, so selective
that he will choose only one of the thousands of accredited universities in the country.
The level of pomposity and lack of tact
reflected in your letter is a powerful indicator that your august institution might well
be a possibility for John Mongan's future education. It certainly got my attention!
Don't want Bio-Chem students? No problem.
It may surprise you to learn that my interests cover over 400 fields of study, from
semantics to limnology, from object-oriented programming (perhaps one of the youngest
professionals in the country) to classical piano.
What? Of course you don't want egotistical
jerks. Who does? I am self indulgent and over confident, but I'm also amusing. John Mongan
is funny and amusing - whether you're laughing with him or at him.
You're interested in athletes? Great! John
Mongan has played more sports - 47 - than almost any other student, including oddball
favorites such as Orienteering.
You think I can pay for your school? Don't
be too sure. I've got surprises for you there, too.
Why not send a guaranteed admission and
full scholarship to increase your chance of being selected by John Mongan? Why not do it
right now?
Sincerely,
John Mongan
P.S. If you'd like a copy of a fun-filled,
fact-filled brochure, "John Mongan: What a Guy!" just ask.
 
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